Things we need to ch-ch-ch-change

ON THE FIRST DRAFT we need to change:

We need to make the narrative clearer, we will cut down on the opening because the peice is too long anyway, and we feel we need to represnt the characters in a clear way and to make the narrative more obvious to the audience.

One peice of feedback we got from alot of people we showed the first draft is they did not understand why the girl in it was even in it. Originally it was intended to be a genre parody/reference as we observed that in films like Desperado and other mexico-based westerns there is often a spanish bar maid type character who bolts out of the scene before he shoot out starts. However, this did not translate as well as we thought it would and will lend us a little more time if we removed it.

Secondly, the bandana-wearing Mexican in the RED shirt's death scene needs to be reshot as the senorita character is no longer there to clobber him with the frying pan.

Also, we are going to add in some titles, and institutions.

ta ta for now
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