Prelim - Clive

Wednesday, 10 February 2010

DRAFT

Finally the draft for Buckets of Dead Friends is complete-ish.



There's no music or titles yet, but they'll soon be sorted, PLUS we're going to refilm some stuff to keep the length down and make the narrative into a more continuous thing rather than the short film it is now. We also need to add titles and a prodcution company or two, but this is the edited footage as it stands.

Some feedback that we received when I posted this on Facebook (which I shall now answer) was:

  • It seems a bit 'choppy'
    Yes indeed, it does seem a bit choppy, a thing I did notice until having rendered it and playing back at full speed, seeing as Sony Vegas wouldn't play it properly as the file was so huge. I believe this is down to the Film Effect which I applied to the footage, and that there was also several unnecessarily long pauses and bad transitions from shot to shot. 
  • I cut myself short about 20 secs in
    The whole line was supposed to be said, but to save time I made it so Carlos (played by Aidan) interrupted Lucifer (me). But I obviously forgot about making it smoother in favour of blowing stuff up.
  • Make the headsplosion more believable i.e. like the one I did before
    I will do so, involving some neck gore and other stuff.

      That was all of the main feedback so far, though other than that, the general feeling was 'LMAO!!! owain thats sick! i love it :p', to quote one source.

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